I wrote this poem and i want some feed back
~Sun Goes Out~ (Part 1)
Sun goes out
Feel all hazy
Don't know what to do?
I'm so lazy
Sun goes out,
And my world goes blank
I'm so scared
My heart just sank
Sun goes out
Feel like crying
Where do I go?
Everything around me is dying
Sun goes out
Sky is falling
Thinking of answers
Help me I'm stalling
Sun goes out
My world ends
Darkness surrounds me
Closing me in
Sun goes out
There's no one left
Where are you now?
I think to myself
Sun goes out
I detect a shadow amongst the debris
Then out from the darkness I catch sight of your face
It's such a sight for all the world to see
Sun goes out
We're all eachother has
What are we going to do?
Now that it's just me and you
Sun goes out
My life comes to an eclipse
Don't wanna leave you behind
Cause I just bagan to notice the light, to where me safe haven should reside
TO BE CONTINUED.....NEXT QUESTION SAME HEADING
2006-07-25
17:50:43
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