haunted by the voices of yesterday
as they lift me up in a disturbing way
the bittersweet things they say, leave behind a familair pain and i am drawn back like a moth to a flame
where ever i hide i will always be found
i just cant resist their shrilling sounds
tormenting me throught the night
the voices give me hope with the darkest of light
and when the long awaited silence finally takes controll
the emptyness rises into my soul
and i long so desperately
to once again here the voices of yesterday
2006-07-25 17:51:51 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
yeah i wrote it
2006-07-25 18:00:38 · update #1
THAT'S GOOD I LIKE IT---IT PROVOCES THOUGHT OF THE PAST ---GOOD JOB. EMBRACE THE PAST IT EVENTUALLY CONTRIBUTES TO WHO YOU ARE TODAY.
2006-07-25 17:57:39 · answer #1 · answered by Work-N-Hrd-2-Mk-It 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Well, I really do not care for poetry. I don't know why and I mean no disrespect. I did read it, and it at least makes sense. You have several spelling and punctuation errors. For your own good, please use spell check and have someone proof read your work before you submit it for publication.
2006-07-25 18:03:59 · answer #2 · answered by Stupe 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it
2006-07-25 17:55:58 · answer #3 · answered by . 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
did you write it?
2006-07-25 17:55:04 · answer #4 · answered by JennaJennaBoBenna 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
did u write this....
2006-07-25 17:56:29 · answer #5 · answered by reeavees 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋