A friend has asked me to read over a letter she is writing to a judge, and this sentence has me scratching my head:
"The children were in the presence of John Doe only while also accompanied by one of the babysitters; Sarah Doe, Alysa Public, Jane Smith; or myself."
Is there a better way to word or punctuate this sentence? As I said, this is a letter to a judge, so if you are not certain, please abstain from answering this question.
2007-11-18
03:09:56
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