Geography - December 2006

I already posted a question about my school project and if it was written in a good english.
http://uk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AovGBYcWY4DUEPXfN_Ju3l9JBgx.?qid=20061209114014AAqAtvk
I had many mistakes, so I corrected them and now I want to know, if this is good english now:
The Völklinger Hütte belongs to the Saarstahl AG in Völklingen, Burbach and Neunkirchen. Today it is called Saarstahl Völklingen and has 3,700 workers in Völklingen. It is the biggest employer in this area. These are the affiliated activities of Saarstahl: steelworks in Völklingen-Fenne, wire-production in Luisenthal, St. Ingbert, and Köln. Saarstahl has the biggest wire-production in Europe. Exept of producing steel, it also produces formsteel and tools, which are produced in a large rolling mill. This mill has a length of 1km. The rolling mill is in Völklingen Nauweilergewann. The Völklinger Hütte is famous for its forgings, which reach a maximum weight of 400 tonnes. They are manufactured and produced in Saarforge Völklingen. To this range of products belong axle driven shafts for big oceanships, turbinwaves and pieces for machenery, the automobile industry and the nuclear industry. The Saarstahlforges have one of the most modern and biggest forging presses in the world with a press capacity of 8,500 tonnes. The steel for these forgings are smelted in a 100 tonnes electric store. In this electric store is also world-famous high-grade steel produced. There are no furnaces in the Völklinger Hütte anymore. Therefore the pig iron was delivered from the “Rogesa” in Dillingen. The “Rogesa” (Roheisengesellschaft Saar) is a joint venture of the Dillinger Hütte and Saarstahl. They supply the pig iron in liquid conditon. During transport the temperature of the liquid pig iron is 1,400 degrees celsius. In this special railway carriage 80 tons of liquid iron can be transported. The Völklinger Hütte has a share in the “Zentral Kokerei Saar” (ZKS) in Dillingen.

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I'm german and I have to do a school project on english in geography. Would you please check, if this is good english:
The Völklinger Hütte belongs to the Saarstahl AG in Völklingen, Burbach and Neunkirchen. Today it is called Saarstahl Völklingen and has 3,700 workers in Völklingen. It is the biggest employer in this area. These are the affiliated companies of Saarstahl: steelwork in Völklingen-Fenne, wire-production in Luisenthal, St. Ingbert, and Köln. Saarstahl has the biggest wire-production in Europe. But the Völklinger Hütte doesn’t just produce steel, it also produces formsteel and tools. These things will be produced in a big rolling mill, which has a length of 1km. The rolling mill is in Völklingen Nauweilergewann. The Völklinger Hütte is famous for its smithpieces, which reach the maximum weight of 400 tons, they will manufacture and produce in Saarforge Völklingen. To this produce pollet belong axle-drive shafts for big oceanships, turbinwaves and pieces for macheniry, automobile industry and atom industry. The Saarstahlforges have one of the modernst and biggest smithpress in the world with a presspower of 8,500 tons. The steel for these smithpieces are smelted in a 100 tons electric store. In this electric store is also world-famous high-grade steel produced. There are no furnaces in the Völklinger Hütte anymore. Therefore the pig iron was delivered from the “Rogesa” in Dillingen. The “Rogesa” (Roheisengesellschaft Saar) is a joint venture of the Dillinger Hütte and Saarstahl. They supply the pig iron in liquid conditon. During the transport the temperature of the liquid pig iron is 1,400 degrees celsius. In this special railway carriage 80 tons liquid iron can be transported. The Völklinger Hütte has a share with the “Zentral Kokerei Saar” (ZKS) in Dillingen.

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