I am doing a project for this, and there this sentence i am not sure if got anything wrong. Need your kind help here.
"In the past and the future, we remain committed to serve our customer with utmost attention, quality care and focused passion in mind. Our goal is to make you feel our sincerity in providing you with the best and experiencing the world-class sales and after-sales-services, a sensation that you’ll never forget."
Please read this sentence, is there any mistake? please correct for me as i need to submit this tomorrow and thanks for your help.
2006-10-11
02:56:15
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Delight4eva
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