is this a good ferard story?
i wrote it.
please give constructive critisism.
dont be afraid to give your opinion!
Frank sat on stage, the tears rolling down his face. The stadium had long since emptied out, but he refused to move. The shattered remnants of his best friend/guitar lay across from him. He didn't see why everything had to happen to him. He sighed, a fresh wave of tears pouring out of his beautiful hazel eyes. His expression was so helpless and lost that Gerard didn't have the heart to tell him about his hamster dying. Gee had never really realized what the guitar had meant to Frankie. Pansy had always been there for him, while Bob was in the hospital, Mikey was off with Alicia, Ray was distant from everyone, and Gerard… well, when Gerard was off getting drunk and stoned out of his mind. Now Gerard was clean, but Frankie was broken. Gerard shook his head, sending these tangled thoughts to the back of his mind.
2007-11-19
12:53:49
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