is this a good ferard story?
i wrote it.
please give constructive critisism.
dont be afraid to give your opinion!
Frank sat on stage, the tears rolling down his face. The stadium had long since emptied out, but he refused to move. The shattered remnants of his best friend/guitar lay across from him. He didn't see why everything had to happen to him. He sighed, a fresh wave of tears pouring out of his beautiful hazel eyes. His expression was so helpless and lost that Gerard didn't have the heart to tell him about his hamster dying. Gee had never really realized what the guitar had meant to Frankie. Pansy had always been there for him, while Bob was in the hospital, Mikey was off with Alicia, Ray was distant from everyone, and Gerard… well, when Gerard was off getting drunk and stoned out of his mind. Now Gerard was clean, but Frankie was broken. Gerard shook his head, sending these tangled thoughts to the back of his mind.
2007-11-19 12:53:49 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
oops, i forgot to add the rest of it!
He walked over to Frankie, putting an arm around his shoulders. To Gee's surprise, Frank wrapped an arm around his waist, pulling himself closer to Gerard and burying his face in Gee's chest.
"shh… its ok frank, its all gonna be ok." Gee whispered. Frankie shook with sobs, his tears staining Gerard's already black shirt darker. "she had a good life Frankie. You couldn't have made it any better!" Frank looked up into Gerard's eyes, surprised with the emotion in his voice. He saw so many unspoken things in there. ' I will try to help as best I can.' they said. 'if you want me to, I will leave.' they said. But more than anything else, they said: 'I love you and promise to care for you.' Frankie craned his neck and pressed his lips to Gerard's in the most soft and hesitant kiss imaginable. Gerard kissed back, thrilled that the one-way conversation had turned into this. They broke apart and Frank sighed.
2007-11-19 13:23:25 · update #1
They shared occasional kisses under the bright lights of the arena. Neither man knew what would come of this, but neither really cared at the moment. All they knew was that they were there for each other. And, for now…
That was all that mattered.
2007-11-19 13:23:53 · update #2
Aw. Omg, I love it....!!
Very good. It has so much truth to it...
When you finish it, I'd like to see the ending please.
Oh, the ending is simply beautiful...
You have alot of talent!
2007-11-19 13:00:16 · answer #1 · answered by Mrs Adorkable 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very cute but gerard way is married now and i dought they would share occational kisses i really do wonder what their reaction to this story would be if you showed it to them though and that would be somethig to report but that was great you're good at english you know! keep it up!
2007-11-19 23:41:18 · answer #2 · answered by Pastinie 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
im cracking up sorry...
that was awesome! poor pansy...
i love his beautifl hazel eyes... *sigh*
i also wish he would make out with me instead of gee... but then again, dont we all?
2007-11-19 13:37:15 · answer #3 · answered by *Pixie* *Dust* 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That Is Buetieful
2007-11-19 12:57:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
oh my god! i love that! it was just so sweet.
I could imagine it so clearly too!
Your a fantastic writer =]
2007-11-20 09:13:51 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww thats cute
and sad
i like it you should continue
2007-11-19 13:13:09 · answer #6 · answered by ? 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
aww....cute...just like the other one!!! you are very good at writing...write more!!!! i wanna read more!!!! <3<3<3
2007-11-20 13:39:37 · answer #7 · answered by myipodmylife 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's really good. Well done!
2007-11-19 15:36:57 · answer #8 · answered by Sympathy 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good actually =]....but i'm not a fan of MCR
2007-11-19 12:59:01 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
cute!
ur good at writing(:
2007-11-19 13:40:21 · answer #10 · answered by A Miracle In Your Veins<3 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋