Okay, I'm compiling a song for my solo and I require your help 'cuz my mind is messing with me today! =)
Here's the first 2 verses:
"For each night I think of her,
I lose my head in the clouds.
Fame is not everything
But love knows no ____?____"
I await her sweet embrace,
surrender in her arms.
__(need a line w/ 7-6 syllables and the last word has to rhyme w/ "embrace")__,
__(need a line w/ 5-4 syllables and the last word has to rhyme w/ "arms"__.
Oh, by the way, this is a fusion of slow-rock-country song.
Any comments (or critque) are welcome! =)
(If you're interested, our band's name is "Stinkin' Shamrocks," and we have played local gigs around cities like Charlotte Town, Cape Breton, Montreal, Quebec City, Toronto, and Ottawa) =)
2007-02-13
13:11:18
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