Hey guys, I need a bit of help for my next new gig... (read on)?

Question

Okay, I'm compiling a song for my solo and I require your help 'cuz my mind is messing with me today! =)

Here's the first 2 verses:

"For each night I think of her,
I lose my head in the clouds.
Fame is not everything
But love knows no ____?____"

I await her sweet embrace,
surrender in her arms.
__(need a line w/ 7-6 syllables and the last word has to rhyme w/ "embrace")__,
__(need a line w/ 5-4 syllables and the last word has to rhyme w/ "arms"__.


Oh, by the way, this is a fusion of slow-rock-country song.
Any comments (or critque) are welcome! =)

(If you're interested, our band's name is "Stinkin' Shamrocks," and we have played local gigs around cities like Charlotte Town, Cape Breton, Montreal, Quebec City, Toronto, and Ottawa) =)

Answer 1

I await her sweet embrace,
surrender in her arms.
Yearning to see her face,
I'm a victim of her charm(s?)

(I'll keep adding to this message)

Dude, this "fame" line is SO out of place... wtf has fame to do with anything? So you say fame's not everything, and after "but" you'd normally say something like it brings you close to happiness, but you go "but love yaddayadda..." NO SENSE!
So I deleted it to the well-deserved oblivion and tried this:

Every night I think of her,
I lose my head in the clouds,
I lie dying to go to her
But I'm too dumb, too proud

Then go into something like she's your light, and you would be a moth if you didn't resist but you yearn to give in to the temptation and burn... kinda cliche, but a good kind. Rawk on, bro.

Answer 2

But love knows no limits, even in crowds.

I await her sweet embrace,
surrender in her arms.
I dream of her smiling face,
get wrapped up by her charm.

Fate will bring me to her.
One day I will raise my head.
Thanking the heavens above
for listening to what I wished for,
as I knelt down by my bed.

Answer 3

This is a tough one, here's some ideas.....

But love always surrounds

My heart begins to race,
I'm melting in her arms.

I suppose its ok to use the same word twice?

Answer 4

I think you are unfit to compose a song...I will send you one soon filling the gaps!

Answer 5

But love knows no bounds? Still,

Tender smiles face-to-face

I yield to her charms
(or: I love her heart, no harm)