well, I know this seemes stupid but really I need opinons about this. I am actually writing plotlines for this anime site(hasn't ben created yet didn't get to a computer in a while) and I just feel its not quite right. the setting is in a distant future that's not what anyone would exspect, in fact it seemes in the past, but all devices made from a certain time(hadn't made my mind about the date of the disaster) are in the ruens(some of them are used,but usually in an emergancy). I'm not following one main character, it might be 6 to 12(too much? I really want to explore the vew points of them, don't coment this unles u have a good point in it). I don't want to name the disaster because people can make their own gess of it and no confict is involved. The date I chose for the opening is 2067, but I think it's too early. The two character I open with are Diana, a lowclass(poor to middle class) 13 year old girl who works in the fealds and has amazing strength.
2007-02-22
12:49:41
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