tell me how is this poem as i have to submit it to the annual poetry comp now and tell me can i really write poems .
Aim For The Stars
Surrender your soul in the midst of positivity ,
See your tomorrow in the sky of possibilities
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Make your qualities act as an armour against weakness ,
Feel the pain to escalate your strength ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Make your way leading to your shinning destiny ,
Take each day as a ray of optimism ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Follow a path away from the avalanch of negativity
Be thankful to god for this crazy life ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Create an identity of your own in a world filled with entourage ,
Make your dreams form the pinnacle of your tomorrow ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Make your life as pure as the azure ,
Exult your failure as a sign of victory ahead ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Prevent the past from acting as an obstacle for your today ,
Fix your eye on the shimmer of your goal ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
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Don’t make life complicated by counting your looses ,
Look up in the sky to see your reflection in the stars ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Emanicipate yourself from the pecemistic darkness ,
Celebrate your victory with the one’s who celebrate you ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
Visualize your reflection in the mirror of victory ,
Let your life be an epitome of perfection for others ,
Aim for the stars lying next to the moon .
2007-02-19
03:27:56
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