This is a poem/short story thing. Tell me what u think. ( It's based on Cinderella!)
Ashley, Ashley,
So quaint and polite,
Wanted to be out with the rest, one special night
It was Dillon’s sweet sixteen,
No doubt, it would be better than the queen’s.
He was one of the richest in the land,
Rumor had it there would be a live band.
But her evil stepmother Suzie said “NO”, she couldn’t go,
Suzie’s heart was colder than freshly fallen snow.
She had to stay and work at her coffee shop, Linx,
Where she would stay all night and brew up new drinks.
But Ashley’s Angel came to save her, there was only 1 rule;
She had to be home by 12 o’clock, or things would not be cool.
Ashley found Dillon and they danced all night long,
But as Ashley was leaving, she was turned into a frog.
Being a frog would be her fate,
All because, she left the party late.
What Dillon did not know was that his kiss would change her back.
Luckily for Ashley, a good-night kiss was something she didn’t lack.
It must have been true love,
Or his kiss wouldn’t have worked.
Nothing messes with true love,
Because it’s magic at work.
2007-03-27
13:02:37
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