Don't feel bad if you give constructive criticism.
I welcome it.
Is it good?
I Simply Said Goodbye
It would be nice to understand,
Just how I carry on.
Your love, your life, your energy,
There simply just all gone.
You were there when I needed you.
You gave me cause to stand.
My total world turned inside out
I just don’t understand.
I know that you live within me,
We share a single breath.
I know life’s full of love and joy,
But why of cold, dark death.
Everyday I grow stronger,
Everyday you’re gone.
I think of you every time,
The day turns into dawn.
I can live life knowing you’re there,
That place up in the sky.
I just wish that before you went,
I simply said goodbye.
2007-03-27
12:40:25
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