Honest opinions please. if it sucks, say it sucks and tell me why so i can improve. thanks.
love can never truly be defined
with such simple things like words
it heals the soul, body, and mind
and sets one free like a soaring little bird
in time love has the power
to mend broken spirits and broken hearts
it can start off relationships by the hour
a different person, a brand new start
and theres...
i know this love is forbidden
we must go our separate ways
our secret must remain hidden
we'll meet again someday
but the feelings too strong
i just cant let you go
i know this is wrong,
but i want you to know
i cant take the pain
we cant be torn apart
i feel like ive been slain
its torn a hole in my heart
and just in case you were wondering, it was for my english project.
2007-02-16
14:21:30
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knight of cydonia
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