Can you rate my poem, 1-10... and tell me what you think it's about? I wrote it about myself. Thanks!
Title: Simply Complicated
There are so many years, so little time,
Too many dollars, not enough dimes...
Twice as much love for every hard heart,
One mile away, but so far apart...
So much purpose for no reason at all,
One person meant to catch you, but always lets you fall...
So much want for something out of reach,
A youthful mind with no one to teach...
So much simplicity for a soul so complicated,
No time left for a heart so dated...
For something so perfect, so many flaws,
A death to the heart with an unknown cause...
So much hate from something I love,
So much hell from something above...
A lonely soul with too many friends,
A life that's over but a soul that never ends...
Lips that kiss but never feel,
Words come through that are never real...
Eyes so dark that light the world,
Knowledge of an elder, heart of a little girl...
2006-11-25
04:05:14
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