do you like this poem, i made it myself.
invisible:
im sinking farther into a world i dont want to know, my conscience pulls me back and tells me to let it go. my head is hurting , my own heart decieves me.everyone lokks at me like im invisible.sitting in the grass smelling the flowers , i could do this for hours upon hours.i cant help but feel invisible.invisiblity comes frm a deep hurting inside.walking around the big shaded tree i cant help but feel im free.remembering how i had to lie thinking only of the gloomy blue sky.growing up in a world of hope , learning after how to cope.putting my head into my hands and crying out all my tears ...... beacuse i was invisible.
well what do you think??
2006-07-08
16:19:44
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Soccer rox!
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