Entertainment & Music - 31 May 2007

This poem is about self relience- it needs more figurative language and the rhyme scheme needs to be fixed. Can someone attempt to fix theese problems and others in the poem.

Thank You-

"The Path of Life"

There are many paths in life to take
That lead you to places unknown
It is up to you to determine your fate,
Without someone else deciding your own.

Do not let persuasions of others overcome you,
Fight them off one by one;
Clear your thoughts and your mind,
Remember, you are the only one who can decide.

There may be times where you feel alone,
Like no one is on your side;
Echoes of other’s opinions scramble in your head,
But your true distinction will soon be shown.

When it comes to deciding on which path you take,
Your mind is already made up;
Even if your path is different from the rest,
You will have confidence in your decision,
Knowing it was your own and the best.

2007-05-31 10:10:36 · 1 answers · asked by Anonymous in Other - Entertainment

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Why do women smell of fish?

or is it just the ones I meet at the bottom of the sea

2007-05-31 10:09:28 · 29 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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Why does my family think, I can solve all their emotional problems?

I live in New York City, and they all retired to Southamerica. Does this make any sense to you?

2007-05-31 10:09:23 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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what is some music that calms you down or relieves stress?

2007-05-31 10:09:01 · 9 answers · asked by michael k 2 in Other - Music

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Carnivore Cruise Lines wants to know......?

Would you prefer to play Sink ?

2007-05-31 10:08:39 · 5 answers · asked by Ronatnyu 7 in Polls & Surveys

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who would u rather be friends with?

would you rather be friends with JOHNNY!!!! KYLE!!! or cullen please answer we need comments

2007-05-31 10:07:40 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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Are you satisfied with being yourself, who you are, truly yourself?

2007-05-31 10:07:34 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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Doug E. Fresh overshadowing blake?

In this video, don't you feel that even if Blake was doing beter, Doug kept trying to steal the spotlight and Blake was desperately trying to get the spotlight back on him? Don't you think so? I mean i totally ♥ blake, and he did much better, but i thought that was what was going on, and doug didnt even deserve the spolight!

2007-05-31 10:06:39 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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R there any good punk songs?

2007-05-31 10:06:28 · 20 answers · asked by yomamma807 2 in Rock and Pop

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girls of summer in nashville ( 107.5 the river ) info on it?

so I got these free tickets and dont know what it is for it says private concert but whats all going on there? like bands/ party/ who's being featured. I went to the 107.5 the river radio site and they did not say anything but that it its a private concert. i want to go but i want to know what its about b/c if i get there and its not worth the driving i am going to be pissed.

2007-05-31 10:06:27 · 1 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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Excuse me? What exactly do you have there?

2007-05-31 10:05:03 · 42 answers · asked by Miss §hopaholic 5 in Polls & Surveys

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a toby kieth song?

the song is talking about a man coming back to his town after a divorce in the song he says hows that man running my life and then the other line goes there not realy not exspecting me those kids have been threw hell i need this song so please help me i'm begging~~~~~~

2007-05-31 10:04:56 · 11 answers · asked by jessa 2 in Country

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Who/what are you obsessed with?

2007-05-31 10:04:55 · 31 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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Ever mistake Oust air sanitizer for your deodorant spray when semi-awake at 5:00am ? If so,,,?

Did you feel Potpourri fresh all day long?

2007-05-31 10:04:46 · 5 answers · asked by RoyDamnMercer 6 in Polls & Surveys

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Do u eat the cheese puff that falls on the floor?

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haha gues what, i do!! quickly, before the cheese puff sees hes on the floor

2007-05-31 10:03:20 · 26 answers · asked by Anonymous in Polls & Surveys

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How exactly did David Bowie kill off Ziggy Stardust?

Did Bowie announce Ziggy's death in the press or something like that? Also, how did Ziggy die?

2007-05-31 10:03:09 · 2 answers · asked by norton2628 1 in Celebrities

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award me a star for these joke 9wink wink wink)?

Stand on top of the high board and say you won't come down until your demands are met.
Tell the lifeguards that they aren't doing their jobs because you have seen at least 15 people drown today.
Ask people if they have seen your pet shark.
Sit in the baby pool and play with the toys.
Take a flutter board and pretend you can't swim.
Hit strangers with your flutter board.
Ask an attractive lifeguard to practice CPR on you.
Sit in front of a water jet, make moaning sounds and say, "Oh yeah... oooh that feels soooo good....".
Sit on the top of the water slide and don't move.
Swim near a stranger and say, "Dammit I knew I shouldn't have had watermelon before I came here.".
Insist that you saw a monster at the bottom of the pool.
Pretend to drown and then when someone tries to help you, say, "HA-HA, fooled you!".
Scream as someone is trying to do something when jumping off of a diving board.
Laugh at fat people in swimsuits.
Tell people you saw the lifeguard pissing in the pool

2007-05-31 10:02:53 · 5 answers · asked by cash 2 in Jokes & Riddles

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What are signs that your date is a con-artist?

2007-05-31 10:02:22 · 12 answers · asked by Goddess T 6 in Polls & Surveys

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i`ve just made level 7 what do you think of that?

2007-05-31 10:02:19 · 80 answers · asked by james michael c 7 in Polls & Surveys