Give me your honest thoughts,
I have revised it and i want to know if it is good:
Where no one is Alone
The wind sang through the midday sky,
The sun displayed delight.
Some birds began to mingle with,
The clouds’ intriguing white.
Twirling leaves drifted on the air,
The grass began to shift.
A sharp aroma filled the trees,
My breath began to drift.
A world of awe was all around,
Brilliant bliss consumed.
Nature put on the best display.
My thoughts became perfumed.
I could not understand why,
I Never knew such peace.
For just a single moment,
My troubles seemed to cease.
Blooming flowers, and stunning life,
Can shape a place unknown.
It’s safe to know that there’s a place
Where no one is alone.
2007-03-25
09:59:39
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