Which poem do you like best?

Question

) Misery,drown me in the pool of blood that leaks from the seconds of death
Suffocate the breaths that keeps me on this shallow ground Leave me be from the the nightmares that trap me within Dance with the black rose,ripped like fragile paper from not even within a touch skip among mid air,fall and never touch never feel never weep
2) Decieved and kissed
seduced with lies
pushed in the grave of broken glass
stupid,such a foolish doll tied with strings to frolic and play with a crooked smile painted on a blank face

Answer 1

i personally like the first one better than the second because it has a lot more use of fugurative language and its probably more easier the put more emotion in it if you have to read it out. It also more clear

Answer 2

While I know these are expressions of you
I can't help, but feel it's just a moment in time
I realize these are moments I've never been through
and that you probably don't like poems that rhyme,

but I want you to know that you're not alone
There are some who share your pain
In answer to your question, I choose #1
Cause it reaches beyond a place called sane

Painting images of death and defeat
Designed to demonstrate there's only this moment
to decide to feel or to retreate
or to die and feel totally content

But I emplor you, do not be deceived
Death is not a way out
It only opens doors to the unbelieved,
and that's no time to find out

Answer 3

both are slightly depressing, no offense, but i would have to say the first has alot more meaning to it, and the use of imagery is very nice.

Answer 4

Both very depressing--ever try Prozac!

Answer 5

Wow! they both suck. You seem to live in Acron, Ohio.

Or worse.

Answer 6

#2, hands down.

Take care.

Answer 7

i really cant decide there all interesting but totally over ratted

Answer 8

Wow.... bad night?

Answer 9

I don't like either.