Other - Entertainment - July 2006

I wrote this poem and i want some feed back

~Sun Goes Out~ (Part 1)

Sun goes out
Feel all hazy
Don't know what to do?
I'm so lazy
Sun goes out,
And my world goes blank
I'm so scared
My heart just sank
Sun goes out
Feel like crying
Where do I go?
Everything around me is dying
Sun goes out
Sky is falling
Thinking of answers
Help me I'm stalling
Sun goes out
My world ends
Darkness surrounds me
Closing me in
Sun goes out
There's no one left
Where are you now?
I think to myself
Sun goes out
I detect a shadow amongst the debris
Then out from the darkness I catch sight of your face
It's such a sight for all the world to see
Sun goes out
We're all eachother has
What are we going to do?
Now that it's just me and you
Sun goes out
My life comes to an eclipse
Don't wanna leave you behind
Cause I just bagan to notice the light, to where me safe haven should reside

TO BE CONTINUED.....NEXT QUESTION SAME HEADING

2006-07-25 17:50:43 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous

CONTINUED FROM PREVIOUS (SP?) QUESTION

~Sun Goes Out~ (Part 2)

Sun goes out
Your face was the first one I saw while in my hell
It's time now for me to see my way home
The face I first beagn to realize is now and forever the last one i shall see while in the shadows where my greatest fears once dwelled
Sun goes out
A beam of light engulfs me
I pass thrugh time toreach my goal of reaching the world beyond where my wildest dreams and fantasies come true
Light now surrounds me replacing the darkness within
...Sun...Comes Out......For The Very First Moment In My Lifetime

2006-07-25 17:49:23 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous

mike curb song writer producer in nashville curb records

2006-07-25 17:46:40 · 4 answers · asked by barbientenn 1

Yes, this leads to my next question.

2006-07-25 17:43:55 · 34 answers · asked by Just Ask 2

"if i want a baked potato, i just throw it in the oven. and by the time its dont, who knows, maybe i'll want one"

2006-07-25 17:36:55 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous

Is anything wrong with them?
How would they go over today?
Is there any going on today?

2006-07-25 17:21:50 · 9 answers · asked by Mr. Bodhisattva 6

The back of my________ are sticking to the_________!!!!!

I hate Jingles. I can't get them out of my mind.

2006-07-25 17:17:19 · 1 answers · asked by barbaradjt 5

2006-07-25 17:15:12 · 5 answers · asked by Mr. C 3

2006-07-25 17:10:25 · 11 answers · asked by ? 4

I'm sorry if this question looks pathetic. I feel horrible right now.

I make wishes at 11:11AM/PM and sometimes on my fallen eyelashes. Entertain me with your unique styles and ways.



I wish he still loved me ..

2006-07-25 16:59:48 · 3 answers · asked by tingaling 4

don't you think those girls that went missing in the news because they run off to meet some guy they meet on myspace are the dumbest sults you've ever here of????

2006-07-25 16:58:53 · 32 answers · asked by eve u 1

Keep in mind there are people from all over the world on here - so you may have to tell us a bit about it!

2006-07-25 16:58:27 · 3 answers · asked by soulgirl76 4

What is a great program I can download (free trial/demo) where I can make really good avatars and icons that animate? I've seen some awesome ones and I've always wanted to know how people make them. What program has such great effects?

2006-07-25 16:58:14 · 4 answers · asked by kid_at_heart 3

I want to clean it and put it back together and it has me stumped.

2006-07-25 16:56:52 · 1 answers · asked by liebacks 2

i luv dane cook. wats ur fav one?

2006-07-25 16:56:23 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

2006-07-25 16:54:43 · 15 answers · asked by conundrum_dragon 7

That's what "they" say. You know what "they" say. "They" say this and "they" say that. Just who the heck are they!?

2006-07-25 16:53:15 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous

I looked on Yahoo music but i couldn't find it anywhere. tel me a site

2006-07-25 16:49:20 · 1 answers · asked by tiger_9885 3

2006-07-25 16:47:49 · 17 answers · asked by drinkin beer 1

ok on zelda:majors mask....wheere can i get paper for the guy in stock pot inn???...n e 1 noe???

2006-07-25 16:42:26 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

2006-07-25 16:38:38 · 1 answers · asked by melvin d 1

2006-07-25 16:33:02 · 6 answers · asked by music soothes the soul ♥ 2

so this guy and i are kinda friends. and i have made it pretty clear that i wuld love to date him, and he has made it clear that he likes me. but he doesnt do anything about it. wat it up with that?

2006-07-25 16:25:02 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

And, how do you get to the front of the line while waiting to get on the ride? You take a hand held whoopie cushion with you (its shaped like a hot dog in a bun), you squeeze it. After the third time, people let you go first! I did it yesterday at Magic Mt.

2006-07-25 16:22:18 · 4 answers · asked by ZORRO 3

i'm bored and so i was just wondering what other people did this summer

2006-07-25 16:20:54 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous

2006-07-25 16:14:04 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

2006-07-25 16:06:56 · 3 answers · asked by joy w 1

i want to work on the warped tour. or taste of chaos, those kind of things. even the bamboozle i live close to that. but i don't know where to start. i would work anything-catering, setting up, packing, any volunteer organizations looking for helpers? i also want to work on Fuse network but i have absoloutly no idea where or how to start.

2006-07-25 16:02:28 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

Okay, I'm 13 and I want to stay up all night....I don't know why...I just want to. I don't drink coffee or soda. And I want to know if anyone has any kewl ideas for me to do. My sisters are asleep and I have no friends over...so, does anyone have any ideas for me to do tonight??? THANKS!

2006-07-25 15:56:48 · 38 answers · asked by Kaitlynn J 2

2006-07-25 15:51:40 · 4 answers · asked by joy w 1