This was a poem i wrote about a girl who had gotten her heart broken, and was kind of going through the different phases that you usually go through when somethin like that happens..like first blaming herself and then being angry..etc. It was kind of spontanious, but i hope you like it. And any constructive criticism is always welcome. Thank you. =)
Oh and by the way guys, i just thought i should add that all my poems are not always about how i feel myself, but bout situations and life..and just how a person would feel if they were going through those things...or at least how i think they would feel. :)
Is it surprising that I wonder why?
I feel like a shell
There’s nothing inside
Just hollow remains of a life long ago
I feel like a shell
That’s been lost out a sea
And I can never find my way back
Way back from this apathy
And I can’t find
The things I used to see
I can’t find the things I used to want
I’ve come undone
And I don’t have a needle to stitch me up
2007-01-04
03:08:59
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