Hey! I'm a 14 yr old who loves to write & am told I have a lot of talent.. I like getting comments on my writing..& this is one of those times! So, if u dont mind: can u read this & tell me what u think?
Sometimes, I get lost in your thoughts while the world around me continues doing their own thing...end up simply staring into space, thinking about where you are and who you are...I smile at nothing visible but at the thoughts of finding you and falling in love...I feel pretty stupid but I just can't help those times when I get stuck in your mysterious trance...&& then, there are those times- those moments...where out of no where...I feel as if you're getting closer and closer to me...I feel as if you're thinking about me...&& I finally get that assuring feeling of knowing that your trance isn't a lie, it's for real...Jaan, find me during this season of love && make me all yours, because I'm ready to fall in love- all into your arms.
(Jaan means my life/love in hindi)
Thankss!
2007-01-02
13:28:37
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Lina
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