looking for brutally honest answers, im thinking about writing songs for a band but not sure if they're good enough. heres one a taste of a recent slam poem
~ I tell u the truth But you would rather keep the lie So don’t believe me By law u have the power So kill me and pretend to cry as I fall apart in torture, n eventually die And just explain the story tell your lawyer I wouldn’t say sorry She wouldn’t say sorry I just couldn’t stand the sarcasm anymore I’d rather kill er and watch er die I’d rather sit and stare at the blood, the glorious gore Than hear her not apologize Put em in jail! Plz look what they have done They killed my heart slowly for all the years of my life And when they knew I caught on, they killed me all over again on the outside Right now im not concious but I can tell u whats goin on Daddy and mommy said it was an accident They say it was my fault, that I was fricken on dope Then explain the f**king hands marks around my purple throat ! ~
2006-07-25
16:52:44
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