Please,check if the sentence is correct?

Question

Is this a correct composition?

On the day we usually eat a special boiled food called okokbab made of five kinds of
grains:rice,glutinous rice, soybean, red-bean,
and foxtail millet.

Answer 1

One special holidays, we eat a traditional dish known as "okokbab." This dish is made from boiling together five main ingredients: rice, glutinous rice, soybeans, red beans and foxtail millet.
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Sorry, I totally massacred & re-wrote your original sentence.

** how is rice a different grain from glutinous rice?

** soybeans & red beans are not grains, they are beans!


PS: this dish is not Indian, I am guessing maybe Korean?

Answer 2

Its pretty correct but this is what i would change it to if i were you-

On the day we usually eat a special food which is boiled, called okokbab. It is made from five kinds of grains including rice, glutinous rice, soybean, red-bean, and foxtail millet.

Hope this helps!

Answer 3

On the day, we usually eat a special boiled food called okokbab; which is made with five grains: rice, glutinous rice, soybeans, red beans, and foxtail millet.

Answer 4

I'm not a Native English speaker, but 'boiled food' sound weird to me. I think I would say - "We eat special food called okokbab, which is made of five kinds of
grains:rice,glutinous rice, soybean, red-bean,
and foxtail millet boiled together.' Or something like that...
And I also think you don't need an 'a' before 'special food'.

Answer 5

A basic guideline for writing is that one ugly long sentence can always be improved by making two short sentences out of it.
On- name the specific day using a proper noun- we will usually eat a special boiled dish called Okokbab. Okokbab is made from glutinous rice , long grain rice[change as needed] soy beans , red beans and foxtail millet.

Answer 6

You don't eat food on the day...you eat it on the plate..

On the days when we eat okokbab, we......(fill in the blank). The okokbab is a special dish that is boiled and made up of 5 ingredients (rice, glutinous rice, soybeans, red-beans, and foxtail millet).

Answer 7

On the day..do you mean during day time or "for lunch"? Go for "a special ( or typical) cooked dish that consists of five different ingredients..." :)

Answer 8

1. on the day is wrong.
2. five kinds of grains i wrong: it should be 5 kind of cereals.

Answer 9

On this day instead of On the day and a , in front of grain

Answer 10

during the day ,on these special days