I really would like to know what you guys think
Is it good
If you don't think it is good can u please be specific so I can change it.
If Only I Knew Why
Crimson sand makes the desert floor,
The azure sky guards on.
Purple breath envelops my lungs,
The night turns into dawn.
I hear the distant sound of life,
Right now I am alone.
This space belongs to only me,
This spot becomes my own.
I gaze at the snowy white clouds,
As unvoiced time stands still.
I lose myself in arid air,
The wind provides a chill.
My hands endure the passing gust,
My mind begins to float.
I rest among the lilac sky,
My thoughts become remote.
I smell the chalky, bitter scent,
My life stands idly by.
My soul and body disconnect,
If only I knew why.
2007-03-27
10:51:50
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