rate my poem please!!!!!!!!?
okay so its not finished but this is wat i have so far.....
do u hate liers?
ones that keeps secerts from the world and u of all
this secert i have that u dont no
this secrt that came crushing down on u
like a boulder,the world is now on ur shoulders
jus like back then
remmber when all i did was cry
i couldnt help but sit and wonder why?
why me of all,i dont no
but wat i do no is it was my decision
no ones but mine,forever and always
i cant change it now,no matter how much i want to
im jus gonna have to make it through my pain
o dont cry for me cuz ive done my years of cryin
swallowed and still makin through my strain
some might think its all a game
but this is real
true pain that i have
and believe me nor u or i can do change this cuz ive already tried
hopefully ill forget
and one day leave this in the past
though they say ur past is wat made u wo u are now
so if this is true im a strong,beautiful,smart,indepen... person or shall i say woman cuz their
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is no child in here from wat i no
no child could bare this guilt
but for now im gonna put this part of my past locked away in my in my little box of secerts
cuz no matter how much i dont wanna say it
it will always be APART of me,thats wat i'd like to think
but then i'd be indinile
it'll never be me whole cuz thats not who i am,but it is a small part of me that makes me whole
makes me who i am
makes me,me
wat else can i say i can only be bree!!!!!!
p.s.this poem was inspired by my inner most thoughs and pain,so love it or hate it
it dosen't matter to me
just except it thats all i ask!!!!
snap,snap,snap 4 the poet(im no poet this is lik my 3rd serios poem ive ever wrote)
2006-10-11
13:37:03
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