can you rewrite this [please]?

Question

My apology wasn't enough
my friendship meant nothing
you said you weren't the same
i feel like im the only one left to blame
nobody knows how much pain you gave me
when you said it was over between us.
so i guess ill forget that you even existed and give up.
i made a mistake of meeting you
because i thought you would care and like me
but it was just a dream i woke up too and it just ended so quickly
with a goodbye=[

Answer 1

I think your writing is good enough; however, you didn't punctuate but here goes.. . . . .

I suppose my apology wasn't enough and my friendship meant nothing to you. You assured me you were different than others but you were so predictable with your game. I know now I have only myself to blame for my feeling of loss. Only I know how much pain you caused me when you told me it was over between us. Over, almost before it began.

I realize I made a mistake going out of my way to meet you. It will be difficult but I'll forget you ever existed and give up my fruitless dream of believing you could care for me or love me. I know now it was all a dream from which I awoke in time to see your retreating back and hear your solemn goodbye as you walked out of my door.

Answer 2

I could. But it seems to be ok.

So, I would change a couple things. Put caps at the start of each line. Capitalise /i/ when it is the person "I". Start a new line at "And give up" to make that line have power. Start a new line at "It ended so quickly", to show that it ended quickly (short line = fast)

Well done saying what you feel.