I am sending this to a girl I love. She does not know I love her. Can you help me to make it more impressive?
Sorry for choosing today to extend a birthday wish your way as I only know you are a December girl, but I don’t know when your exact birthday is. I think today is the best day to give you the wish as the sky is clear, wind brow softly, and the sun rised up again this morning in which assembled such a wonderful day, for that it is as same as a wonderful you. May your 50th is full of joy and happiness, and be the best that you ever had. May you not only have your cake in this coming wonderful year, but also eat it too.
2007-12-23 08:55:41 · 6 answers · asked by Jackson 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
DONT, change it so it sounds more personal and like you are actually saying it
^^Nobody actually talks like that^^^^^
She'll like it =]
2007-12-23 08:59:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I only know you are a December girl, but I don’t know when your exact birthday is. Sorry for choosing today to extend a birthday wish your way. I think today is the best day to give you the wish as the sky is clear, the wind brows softly, and the sun rises up again this morning all assembling such a wonderful day - just as wonderful as you. May your 50th be full of joy and happiness, and may it be the best that you have ever had. May you not only have your cake in the coming wonderful year, but also eat it.
2007-12-23 17:04:40 · answer #2 · answered by associate001 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry for choosing today to extend a birthday wish your way as I only know you are a December girl, but I don’t know when your exact birthday is. I think today is the best day to give you the wish as the sky is clear, wind blowing(?) softly, and the sun rising up again this morning in which assembled such a wonderful day, for that it is the same as a wonderful you. May your 50th be full of joy and happiness, and be the best that you ever had. May you not only have your cake in this coming wonderful year, but also eat it too
Eh, not the greatest but that's my minimum.
2007-12-23 17:00:28 · answer #3 · answered by Peezy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry for choosing today to extend a birthday wish your way, I only know that you are a December girl. I don't know exactly when your birthday is. I think today is the best day to give you the wish as the sky is clear, wind blows softly, and the sun rising up again this morning. Everything is so perfect because it is your special day. May your 50th be full of joy and happiness, and be the best that you ever had. May you not only have your cake in this coming wonderful year, but also eat it too.
(hope this helps you)
2007-12-23 17:09:58 · answer #4 · answered by Emily L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't begin apologizing! If you like her you want to begin confident - - -
try something like this: Happy Birthday! I know your birthday is in December, but don't know the exact day. Today is a beautiful day so I thought it fitting and perfect to extend a birthday wish to a /(or) the beautiful woman that this day reminds me of.
May your .... etc....
Oh, don't say "have your cake and eat it too" cliche'
2007-12-23 17:14:57 · answer #5 · answered by Frank S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Start over.
2007-12-23 16:59:51 · answer #6 · answered by ScSpec 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋