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my friend is having a bday party and we each have to make a song to win the jacck pot we are going to play it on a guitar but it has to follow a BLLUES SONG format so can you help it can be about anything it can be cheesy it doesnt matter
o it has to be 3 verses (9 lines total)

BLUES FORMAT:
write a sentence
2nd sentence is repeated like the 1st
and make a new sentence up

write a sentence
2nd sentence is repeated like the 1st
and make a new sentence up

write a sentence
2nd sentence is repeated like the 1st
and make a new sentence up




so an example is:
Here writing the blues
here writing the blues
go no clue what to do!



and 2nd verse
blah blah
blah blah

and 3rd verse
blah blah
blah blah



THXS 4 ur help

Answer 1

so i'm here on yahoo answers
yes i'm wasting all my time
i'm here on yahoo answers
yes i'm wasting all my time
one day i'll look back on this wasted time
and i will view it as a crime

Answer 2

This song is one of my soon to be realest songs it was copy written in 2004 It is played in the Key of G (it will be realest in about 2 to 5 months)

CANT LOSE THESE BLUES

(choirs)
No matter what I do I always feel blue
no matter what I do I always feel blue
I cant seem to loses these blues

(Verse)
Drove a 914 went 2twenty2
Drove a 914 went 2twenty2
and I could still see Blue in my rear view

(chorus)

Drank a 26er and a 2four
Drank a 26er and a 2four
and even the booze couldn't chase away my blues

(Chorus)

The sun should be shining but all I see is rain
the sun should be shinning but all I see is rain
Its coming down on my window pain

(Chorus)

Its half past midnight and my lamp is burin low
Its half pas midnight and my lamp is burnin low
I'm as low as a man can go

(Chorus)

No matter what I do I cant lose these Blues

`I do not under stand why any one would give me a thumbs down for this answer , as this song I wrote is a hit with my fans,Every one who has been to my concerts loves this song
and its soon to be realest by a major record company.
and you have a chance to be one of the first to play this song
I Guss some people prefer to be followers instead of leaders

Answer 3

The Blues only uses this format as a guideline. They truly great artists frequently do NOT repeat lyrics, and often deviate from this verbal "framework".

Answer 4

Are you splitting the jack pot with the author?

Answer 5

_______________________

I'm givin' you the best damm blues, a good man's ever gonna get
I'm givin' you the best damm blues, a good man's ever gonna get
Now give me a beer, 'cause you ain't given me a damm thing yet

_______________________

I rolled up to your house, with too much on my mind
I rolled up to your house, with too much on my mind
You ain't got no good lookin' women here, I might as well be blind

_______________________

Let's drink to my woman, best woman I ever found
Let's drink to my woman, best woman I ever found
I'm glad she ain't here now, too many horney men around

_______________________


Good Luck!

Kevin Chisholm - American Guitarist

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