What do you think of these poems? Guys and Girls?part 3?

Question

Don't cry for me
For we will be
Reunited once again
It may be hard to leave
But you must
Get back to
Your life
It may be hard
But please
For our sake
Please don't cry
You know I love you
And we will be
Together once more
So don't shed
Those tears
For this deep sorrow
Will soon pass
You know that
I'll always
Be in your heart
And you
In mine

Here's another

This emotional pain
Is way to great
Why does it
Hurt so bad
All these
Looks of scorn
Endless
Emotional pain
It's a
deathly pain
Plucks at the
Heartstrings
Making you
Weep at
Every little thing
Why does it
hurt so bad
When I'm torn
This way
I cry for
The emotional pain
For it is
Too great
To bear

Answer 1

The first one is much better.Simple message but well done.