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I am writting a book. It is about a futuristic society that is being brainwashed by the ruler. His father was the first to start brain washing people when he was the ruler, now its his turn. But he is different, he was born with his own mind. He invents new machiens that takes over people's brains and makes them bow down to him. The book is about a girl who was born with a mind of her own, and how she is taken to another world (our world) she lives with a family who has just lost a wife and a mother. The ruler took her to the hospital to get her brain fixed, but the only hostpital was in the other world (our world) the doctor (who she ends up living with) is determined to help her, so he takes her to his house to live after she tells him how the ruler slapped her. Right now in my book, she just arvived and she doesnt know anything about this place. What should happen next, there is so much for her to learn! Thanks!

2007-10-27 06:45:53 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture Religion & Spirituality

Oh and these worlds are connected.

Sorry about the bad spelling lol.

2007-10-27 07:01:28 · update #1

4 answers

She doesn't know how to cross the road in our world, gets run over by a truck and dies. The autopsy shows she is a robot created by the ruler's father and the body disintegrates when the CPU is examined.

2007-11-03 18:41:31 · answer #1 · answered by jemhasb 7 · 0 0

It is not clear to me as to how these two worlds interact with each other; how does the ruler take her to the hospital f she is on ours but he is on the other? Sorry. Wish I could help.

2007-10-27 13:54:56 · answer #2 · answered by kent_shakespear 7 · 1 0

I think she should go to a cinema and watch 'Aeon Flux'.

CD

2007-10-27 13:57:27 · answer #3 · answered by Super Atheist 7 · 2 1

next should be spelling lessons!!!! good luck!

2007-10-27 13:58:31 · answer #4 · answered by meister 4 · 1 1

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