I need help in correcting/ grammar. this sentence doesn't sound right?

Question

Although the use of language leads the Monster to future ordeals, it also serves as a passage for the Monster to express his feelings.

Answer 1

I would use "has lead" instead of "leads"

Answer 2

The use of language leads the Monster to future ordeals, it serves as a passage for the Monster, to express his feelings.

Answer 3

Future ordeals? Whats a future ordeal?

Although the use of language leads the Monster to potential suffering, it also serves as a passage for the Monster to express his feelings.
That sounds better.

Answer 4

Although the use of language leads the monster to future ordeals, it also serves as a passage for the monster to express his feelings towards others.

you shouldn't capitalize monster and also and the end make sure you put where his feelings go.

hope i helped

Answer 5

Maybe just a little rephrasing?

1) Although the use of language leads the Monster to future his ordeals, it serves as a passage for him to express his feelings.

2) The use of language leads the Monster to future his ordeals. However, it serves as a passage for him to express his feelings.

3) Although the use of language has led the Monster to future his ordeals, it also serves as a passage for him to express his feelings.

Hope this helps. :)

Answer 6

Although, the use of language leads the Monster to future ordeals, it also serves as a passage for the Monster to express his inner deep feelings.

If "the" doesn't have to be there then exclude it.
If the Monster is a name, then just put Monster.
If it's not a name and just a like regular person put the monster. with no capital

Answer 7

Language alows the monster to express his feelings, yet it also leads the monster into future ordeals.

Your sentence sounds too passive by begining with the "although."
Say it simple, and it will draw the reader in.

Answer 8

The use of language leads the monster to future ordeals and also provides a way for him to express his feelings.

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Answer 9

It's correct, but I'd say it simpler: Although the use of language leads the Monster to future ordeals, it also helps him to express his feelings.

Answer 10

OK This sentence is filled with the supposition of your theory that the residents in the realm of the monster have the ability to understand the language of your monster. So, I am offering you my solution for improving your sentence.
Language has evolved as a method to communicate individual mental abstractions into vocalized sounds, the meaning of which represents the ability of members of the group to accurately interpret the meaning of these sounds.
The development of language is probably the most significant dynamic that has provided a way for the members of the group to communicate their thought processes in more than gutteral grunts, and body language. If the group includes a "monster" who is able to understand the collective opinion of the group, through the use of their tribal language, there is a strong possibility for the resolution of these ordeals using their language, as a tool for arbitration and mediation. Language also provides these tribal members a method to convey emotion by way of articulated vocalized expression.

Answer 11

Haha, someone's reading FRANKENSTEIN! Fun one for halloween.

Language acts as a conduit to express the Monster's feelings, however it also leads to his future misgivings.