Love no more
I knew I loved you and thought Of you but I still holding on to you. as if you were falling. I thought I got rid of you so the heart stabbing pain will go away. But I feel as if my heart beat Is chanting your name wanting you, and it follows. But my heart still feels heavy from the pain. But should I have thoughts for you. Will we ever be?
2007-10-05 12:45:10 · 5 answers · asked by Julia 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
ya i wrote it... its a guy i really like i cant tell if he likes me or not... but i found out he liked someone esle... so i broke to pices :(
2007-10-05 12:51:31 · update #1
that it a great poem. i almost cried because that is exactly how i feel right now. did you write that?
2007-10-05 12:49:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Uh...damn. Not your conventional Hallmark card sort of moment, but it was evocative, which is what good poems do. Let's see some more work. Not bad; not bad at all.
2007-10-05 19:50:20 · answer #2 · answered by Captain S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ahw! i think it's very lovely especially if you are actually giving it to a person = )
2007-10-05 19:49:59 · answer #3 · answered by ipodlady231 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats pretty good. are u thinking of giving it to someone?
2007-10-05 19:48:13 · answer #4 · answered by svetulya13 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good, some of it even pertained to me
2007-10-05 19:49:27 · answer #5 · answered by Aryn M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋