I agree that "clippings" might work better than clips. And "showcasing" is good but "demonstrating" works better in my opinion. The grammar is perfect.
2007-09-22 06:58:51
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answered by jellybeanchick 7
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No commas needed.
"Clippings" instead of "clips"
I think showcasing is OK, sounds a bit cocky. On a ********* scale of 1-10, I'd put it at maybe a 4.
Or maybe try something like: "Attached are some newspaper clippings that adequately demonstrate my versatility as a writer."
2007-09-22 07:01:29
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answered by Anonymous
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Obviously, you are a WANNABE writer. I suggest you find some books on the subject and learn more about this.
Persaverence is 99% of success. Keep at it.
The word showcase is usually associated with stage performing. It may be helpful to consult a Thesaurus to find words of better choosing.
2007-09-22 07:05:33
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answered by Anonymous
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I have attatched some newspaper "clippings" showcasing my versitility...
Showcasing works no need for a comma.
2007-09-22 06:56:08
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answered by Anonymous
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You don't need a comma, but it doesn't flow well. I would say it this way:
I have attached some examples demonstrating my versatility as a writer.
2007-09-22 06:58:04
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answered by Anonymous
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To showcase my versatailty as a writer, I have attached my publications that i am sure you will enjoy.
2007-09-23 12:04:27
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answered by krissi poppy 2
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I don't know where you intended to put it, but a comma isn't needed anywhere in your sentence. "showcasing" is a bit pretentious, "showing", "illustrating" or "demonstrating" work as well and sound better.
2007-09-22 06:58:34
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answered by Anonymous
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I THINK ITS OK
good by to 16000 hyphens
i mean you beter consult new release of SHORTER OXFORD ENGLISH DICTIONARY { S O E D }
2007-09-22 07:04:42
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answered by manoj m 1
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looks good to me
2007-09-22 06:59:19
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answered by Anonymous
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very good!, comma not necessary.
2007-09-22 06:56:02
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answered by Dragon'sFire 6
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