Where were you the day I was born.Where were you the day I cut my first tooth.Where were you the day I took my first step.Where were you the day I had chicken pox.where were you the day I was crying for you.Where were you the day I started school.Where were you the day I took my first day class.Where were you the day i graduated from school.where were you the day I got engaged to my beau.Where were you the day I got married.Where were you the day I gave birth to one,two and three boys.Where were you the day I got divorced.Where were you the day I needed you.where were you the day I flew to Heaven.Where were you the day I looked down on you.where were you the day I opened the gates for you.Where were you,oh just where were you?
2007-09-08 08:18:19 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
i like evrything but the very last part that says 'oh just where were you?'
do away w/that and its rockin!
good work!
2007-09-08 08:22:41 · answer #1 · answered by ellie may 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I enjoyed it. I didn't quite understand the sentence "Where were you the day I looked down on you" . Wouldn't you know if you were looking down at the person? I enjoy thought provoking writings.
2007-09-08 15:28:40 · answer #2 · answered by The Voice of Reason 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like that. Where were you the day all those things happend with me? Except I haven't died yet. Miss M is dizzy because she is blond...dizzy blond spin around now...there you go.
2007-09-08 15:22:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
If it's a poem.. Not a bad job, but it's very repetitive.
2007-09-08 15:22:25 · answer #4 · answered by Steffi 2 · 2⤊ 2⤋
I don't know. Did something happen to make you write this?
2007-09-08 15:23:09 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
I was eating burrittos.
2007-09-08 15:22:45 · answer #6 · answered by Sarah 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
so many wheres
2007-09-08 15:23:08 · answer #7 · answered by Aryan K 2 · 1⤊ 2⤋
too many sentences beginning with "where were you"....
making me dizzy
:~p
can't even finish reading it....
2007-09-08 15:21:37 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋
I don't.
2007-09-08 15:21:37 · answer #9 · answered by janicajayne 7 · 1⤊ 3⤋
what?
2007-09-08 15:21:35 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋