who can help me with my english??

Question

i need to know if these sentences are good...
i speak spanish... =D



People could't use the phone to speak with friends in the street.
People could write a letter to comunicate with somebody.
People could use a record player to listen music.
People could travel by ship to other city.
People had to use a photographic camera to take a picture.
People had to wear formal clothes everywhere.
People couldn't have a personal computer in their houses.
People can a mobile phone to speak with friends in the street.
People can send e-mail to comunicate with somebody.
People can use a Mp3 to listen music.
People can travel by plane to other city.
People can have a notebook and to take it everywhere.

Answer 1

the first one u need to spell out could't like ''couldn't'' or ''could not''
comunicate needs an extra m so it would be communicate in 2nd one
3rd one you need to add a ''to'' in between listen and music
in the 8th sentence you need to revise it quite a bit so it should be, people can use a mobile phone to speak with friends when on the street.
9th one need you need the word ''an'' in before email your comunicate needs an ''m''
11th one, you need to get rid of the word other and put the word ''another''
last one should be, people can take a notebook anywhere they want

good try though, seems like you put a lot of effort, i suggest you take esl(english student learning or english as a 2nd language in ur area) try getting some help from students, friends, family members, and teachers, if you want you can add me to your friends/contacts list

Answer 2

People couldn't use the phone to speak with their friends in the street.
People could write a letter to communicate with somebody.
People could use a record player to listen to music.
People could travel by ship to other cities.
People had to use a photographic camera to take a picture.
People had to wear formal clothing everywhere.
People couldn't have a personal computer in their houses.
People can use a mobile phone to speak with their friends in the street.
People can send an e-mail to communicate with somebody.
People can use a MP3 player to listen to music.
People can travel by plane to other cities.
People can have a notebook and take it everywhere.

Hope this helps

Answer 3

People could't use the phone to speak with friends in the street.

couldn't would be the correct spelling, but do you mean "shouldn't?"

People could write a letter to comunicate with somebody.

Good, two m's in communicate

People could use a record player to listen music.

to listen "to" music

People could travel by ship to other city.

to another city

People had to use a photographic camera to take a picture.

Good

People had to wear formal clothes everywhere.

Good

People couldn't have a personal computer in their houses.

Good, but do you mean shouldn't?

People can a mobile phone to speak with friends in the street.

can use a mobile phone

People can send e-mail to comunicate with somebody.

communicate

People can use a Mp3 to listen music.

an Mp3 player

People can travel by plane to other city.

another city

People can have a notebook and to take it everywhere.

Good

Unas cositas, pero mejor que mi espanol! :)

Answer 4

People could use a record player to listen to music.
People could travel by ship to a nother city.
People can use a moblie phone to speak with friends in the street.
People can use an MP3 to listen to music.
People can travel by plane to a nother city.
People can have a notebook and take it everywhere.

Answer 5

In N Z you without doubt have a couple of expressions which aren't heard in other places, no longer even in Australia. I am southern English, however used to be in Oz for 3 years within the early Nineteen Seventies. Visited N Z round Auckland for a couple of hours at the means house from Oz via sea. But then, what's "English" English or British English? As some distance as I am involved the North (of England) is a further nation for language!

Answer 6

Some minor mistakes I found..No biggie..

People could write a letter to communicate with someONE.
People could travel by ship to other CITIES.
People can HAVE a mobile phone to speak with friends in the street.
People can send e-mail to communicate with someONE.
People can travel by plane to other CITIES.
People can have a notebook and take it everywhere. (take out TO)

Answer 7

People can *use* a mobile phone to speak with friends in the street.
People could travel by ship to *another* city
People could write a letter to *communicate* with somebody.
Suerte

Answer 8

i would say either "people could travel by ship to other cities" or "people could travel by ship to another city" depending on how many cities you are speaking about. same situation with the "people can travel by plane to other city" sentence

"people can use a mobile phone to speak with friends in the street"

in the "people can have a notebook and to take it everywhere" the "to" is unecessary. it should say "people can have a notebook and take it everywhere"

hope i helped!

Answer 9

People could travel by ship to other city is not correct it could be: People could travel by ship to OTHER CITIES or People could travel by ship to ANOTHER CITY.

You can also use people couldn't have a personal computer in their homes. But 'houses' can work too.

People can travel by plane to ANOTHER CITY o people can travel by plane to OTHER CITIES

People could use a record player TO listen TO music.

People can use AN MP3 to listen TO music

People can have a notebook and take it everywhere. No necesitas agregarle 'to' al la phrase.

Espero que esto te ayude. Fue mi gusto ayudarte.

Answer 10

1. could't=couldn't
2. comunicate=communicate
3. After "listen" comes a "to"
4. city=cities
5.take out "photographic"
6. After "can" comes "have"
7. e-mail=e-mails
8. After "listen" comes "to"
9. city=cities
10. take out "to" before take

Nice job!!