A 22-year-old, Sally from Texas who has fell in love with modeling. She has been able to work with some the best photographers that have done amazing work and has been able to travel all over the world modeling! She is a spokesmodel for an energy pill, loves to work in print, commercial, runway and am always up for something new.
2007-08-22 01:01:47 · 14 answers · asked by mbw m 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
A 22-year-old, Sally from Texas, has fallen in love with modeling. She has been able to work with some the best photographers,who have done amazing work, and has been able to travel all over the world modeling! She is a spokesmodel for an energy pill, loves to work in print, commercial and runway and is always up for something new.
I'm pretty sure this is now grammatically correct.
2007-08-22 01:07:44 · answer #1 · answered by Mrs.M 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
22-years-old Sally from Texas has fallen in love with modeling. She has been able to work with some OF the best photographers, who have done amazing work, and got the opportunity to travel all over the world modeling! She is a spokesmodel for an energy pill, loves to work in print, commercial and runway and is always up for something new.
2007-08-22 01:10:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sally (could help if you add the last name), a 22 year old from Texas, has fallen in love with modeling. She has traveled the world through her modeling, and has worked with some of the best photographers. She loves to walk the runway and is always up for anything new. She has appeared in a number of print ads and commercials, and is also the spokesperson for (what brand?) energy pill.
2007-08-22 05:44:27 · answer #3 · answered by Jessica 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
22-year-old Sally from Texas has fallen in love with modeling. She's happy to have worked with photographers who have done amazing work, and to have traveled all over the world modeling! She's a spokesmodel for an energy pill, loves to work in print, commercial and runway modeling, and is always up for something new.
2007-08-22 01:24:52 · answer #4 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If this is a part of a resume describing yourself, it should read:
A 22-year-old, Sally from Texas in love with modeling. Has been working with some the best photographers and traveling all over the world! She is a spokes model for an energy pill. Loves to work in print, commercial, runway. Always up for something new.
2007-08-22 01:15:50 · answer #5 · answered by Aphrika 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
A 22-year-old, Sally from Texas, has fell in love with modeling. She has been able to work with some the best photographers who have done amazing work, and has been able to travel all over the world modeling! She is a spokesmodel for an energy pill, loves to work in print, commercial and runway and is always up for something new.
2007-08-22 01:06:58 · answer #6 · answered by primalterozi 3 · 0⤊ 3⤋
Sally a 22 year old from Texas has fallen in love with modeling.She has worked with some of the best photographers whose work has been amazing and has traveled the world on modeling assignments.She is a spokes model for an energy pill.She loves to work in print,commercial and runway.She is always up for something new
2007-08-22 01:16:26 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sally (could help if you add the last name :P), a 22 year old from Texas, has fallen in love with modeling. She has traveled the world through her modeling, and has worked with some of the best photographers. She loves to walk the runway and is always up for anything new. She has appeared in a number of print ads and commercials, and is also the spokesperson for (what brand?) energy pill.
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I’ve corrected a number of things, hope you don’t mind. Try avoiding run-on sentences and try keeping your ideas in focus.
Hope this helped.
2007-08-22 01:31:22 · answer #8 · answered by Kwinsi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
[She is] a 22-year-old,called Sally,from Texas,who has fallen in love with modelling. She has been able to work with some of the best photographers that have done amazing work.She has been able to travel all over the world modelling! She is a spokes model for an energy pill, loves to work in print, commercial, runway and is always up for something new.
the first bit i'm guessing is continuing on from a sentence?'cause it doesn't make sense by itself.
2007-08-22 01:25:38 · answer #9 · answered by toastxcore 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Hello my name is Sally. I am a twenty-two years old from Texas, who has falllen in love with modeling. I have been very fortunate to have worked with some of the best photographers, that has done amazing work which has allowed me to be privilaged enough to have traveled the world. Currently I am a spokesmodel for an energy pill, I enjoy working in print, commercial, runway and I'm always up for the challenge of something new.............(hope this helps)
2007-08-22 01:13:17 · answer #10 · answered by morena_mocha 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋