I read this to a book and i want a native speaker to correct this. thanx
2007-06-21 20:56:29 · 6 answers · asked by angel 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
I went to a small town, there wasn't a hotel in sight.
2007-06-21 21:00:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I went to a town where there wasn't a hotel. or there weren't hotels.
towns are by nature smaller than cities , therefore you really don't need small in there, but for effect I guess, you can leave it in their
just inject small before town in either option: a small town
2007-06-22 04:01:08 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Towns can be small or large.
You don't need the "anywhere"
"I went to a small town where there was no hotel."
2007-06-22 04:05:32 · answer #3 · answered by San Diego Art Nut 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I went to a small town where there was no hotel
I went to a small town where no hotel could be found
I went to a small town but I could not find a hotel
2007-06-22 04:01:22 · answer #4 · answered by omni4tress 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I went to a small town where there wasn't a (single) hotel to be seen/found.
2007-06-22 08:02:32 · answer #5 · answered by JJ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You will have to contact the native speaker and tell him to correct the problem. Send him a letter or call him up.
2007-06-22 04:01:43 · answer #6 · answered by JoJoBa 6 · 0⤊ 3⤋