Ladies, if I was to write u this sweet poem from the heart, would u be interestied in me?

Question

"girls name", your beautiful, sweet, vibrant "color of hair" hair can bring any man to their knees. Your "color of eyes" tranquil eyes can be acknowledge by a myriad number of men for miles and miles. But, "girls name", when i am with you a feel..."REAL".

Answer 1

As a "pick-up line" or a way of introducing yourself, I don't think if will work very well... It sounds just a touch "stalkerish" to use right away.

Now if you've known the girl for a little while, and you want to let you know how you feel about you - then it would be PERFECT!

You make your feelings well known, and you do a great job describing many of her lovely features (without getting to anything that might turn "creepy").

Don't worry - we won't tell her that you are using tags to write it ;););)

Answer 2

Honestly, it's a nice gesture, but I think you need to put more thought into the poem itself. Make it the eyes that could bring any man to their knees instead of the hair. Focus less on physical characteristics, and more on the girl's personality.

Answer 3

The end is great, the with you i feel real. The rest, however, is cliche. Acknowledged by a myriad number of men is good, but don't focus on features. Foucus on personality.

Answer 4

YESSSS, I love a guy who can do something a little bit more special, like write a poem-- shows that you thought about me, which is sweet! and if you are cute...I would be interested!

Answer 5

i'd think it was kinda lame but cute that you put the thought into it

Answer 6

if you were cute and had a great personality then yes

Answer 7

ya if was for me from my bf sure, why not.I would say its sweet.

Answer 8

no not really...

Answer 9

no...