Okay My poem/story is about once when I was in school and there was a fire drill.
okay here goes
FIRE
Mindin ya biz
doin ya work
ya sixth sense kicks in
ya give ya head a jerk
the bell goes off
ya body goes into alert.
ya run as quickly as the fire's bout ta spread
ya mind feelin the ultimate dread
ya get outside all is safe an clear
ya mind gets rid of ya unwanted fear
Then you're filled with anger an disgust,
cuz ya must know why you were so boldly dragged into the cold
ya see ya need to calm down, cuz while you was runnin for tha hill,
turns out,
it was just a drill.
Tell me what you think . . . .
2007-06-21 12:49:49 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Uh yeah.
2007-06-21 12:52:21 · answer #1 · answered by robee 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To much use of ya, but it was good
2007-06-21 12:53:31 · answer #2 · answered by Chidinma 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice , but i was expecting the last line to read "turns out, irt was jus a fire drill"
2007-06-21 12:55:44 · answer #3 · answered by edawg2362 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good. Not too bad. 8/10.
2007-06-21 13:01:12 · answer #4 · answered by cats 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty true.. sounds more like a rap though
2007-06-21 12:53:27 · answer #5 · answered by footballgrl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
haha pretty good, i wouldnt have been able to come up with that.
2007-06-21 12:53:15 · answer #6 · answered by Megan M 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
eh
it not good
2007-06-21 12:54:12 · answer #7 · answered by a person 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋