this is a note that im gonna give him with the gift i bought. he is graduating this year. i don't want him know that i like him, but if i don't do it, i will regret.
plz look at it, and try to make it perfect!
thank you!
Hey! Happy graduation!
I got this gift for you, in hopes you'll see life threw. Please know that there’s a girl who is always by your side. Maybe one day after you are gone and I'm still here. We will meet again, if it is destiny. : P
2007-06-05 07:24:30 · 16 answers · asked by xomlife 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Sorry you need to do this all over again, it's far from being perfect!!
I don't like "Hey! Happy Graduation" What are you calling a cat over?
OK, Sorry for the sarcasm,
I got this gift for you, hoping that you will enjoy it throughout your life! Please know that there is a girl who is thinking of you. I hope that destiny will bring us back together again, that would be a wish come true.
Because if you say you are gone and I am still here, it sounds like he is dead and you are still alive, and then you say you meet again, where in heaven?? Sorry I just couldn't help that!
Good luck, oh and by the way, if you give him the gift and this letter, I think he will get a hint that you like him! If you don't want him to know that you like him, don't do it!!!!
2007-06-05 07:33:53 · answer #1 · answered by piano19 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok, threw is incorrect, it is supposed to be through....although I have to mention that EVERYONE sees life through to the end so that whole sentence makes no sense.
The destiny thing is creepy.
Just say: Happy Graduation! If you ever need anything I'm here for you. Hope to see you again soon.
2007-06-05 14:32:02 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey! Happy graduation!
I got this gift for you, in hopes you'll see life through. Please know that there’s a girl who is always by your side. Maybe one day after you are gone and I'm still here. We will meet again, if it is destiny. : P
2007-06-05 14:28:38 · answer #3 · answered by strawberrylicious132008 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
1) threw should be through.
2) How about this instead
This girl will still be here, even if you have moved on. Hopefully, if destiny allows, you and I will meet again and build our "together" with each other.
Good luck!!!!
ps - Guys find sentimental quite admireable, but don't reveal it publicly. They do fill you in if they feel it's right to do so.
Don't let anything sway your feelings. If you feel like you need to - then do it - at the least, he will find it touching that you feel as you do.
2007-06-05 14:34:59 · answer #4 · answered by preichwein 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First, faint heart never won fair lover, so I would be bold.
Second, there is some confusing sentiment here, especially with the "maybe one day, after you are gone" as it sounds rather like "someday you'll be dead."
How about this.
"A little something for you, in hopes for a new life. I am here for you, so no matter where you roam, I am always by your side."
2007-06-05 14:30:32 · answer #5 · answered by Experto Credo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just erase everything after Happy Graduation!
If he liked you, he would have asked you out by now.
The destiny talk makes you sound desperate. The "I'm still here" and "by your side" sounds co-dependent.
2007-06-05 14:28:09 · answer #6 · answered by janicajayne 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's cute. Only changes I would make is threw should be spelled through, and after "I'm still here" put a comma not a period.
2007-06-05 14:28:44 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I dont understand the "maybe oneday after you are gona and Im still here" part. Its not even a sentence. Thats the only thing I seen wrong though.
2007-06-05 14:27:43 · answer #8 · answered by Lizard 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
First of all, check your spelling. Second, he will definitely know you like him and that you are coming on a bit strong. Might want to tone it down and just say congrats, reach for the stars and don't be a stranger.
2007-06-05 14:29:05 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
take"if it is destiny" out, that sounds gay...and guys dont play that sentimental shiz...why dont you just talk to him in person, you know get him alone and be upfront about your feelings, if you like him then do something about it, if you dont then you are being childish, sorry to say, but yea who knows, he might like you too, and if he doesnt then at least you know and you can pursue the next relationship
2007-06-05 14:29:10 · answer #10 · answered by renee-nay 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋