If..........?? what do you think?

Question

I had to make this work for school starting with "If" so I decided to try to write a poem....... what do you think?

*If – Love’s strength*

If there was no dead,
There wouldn’t be a last word,
Nor a last kiss.
There wouldn’t be an end for everything.
We wouldn’t need to say goodbye.
So love would never end.
We would always be together,
We would always hug each other,
We could be happy forever.
But if there is dead,
It’s because everything that is born has to die,
It’s to make us take each moment as it was the last,
It’s why we don’t want to be far away from each other,
Not even for a sec.
So dead is what make us value our lives.
But it also makes us cry and suffer.
So, do not give up and fight till the end shows up,
Because each of us can change our future,
And you can change mine,
As I can change yours.
And, if you wanna, there won’t be an end or us,
Not for us.
Cause love never disappears, nor dies.
It’s always there.
Sometimes it’s only hidden inside us,
But just a sign, a touch or a simple smile can awake him
So that, we would never say goodbye to each other.
Because what love bilds,
Nobody can destroy,
Nobody can fight against it.
Because when love shows up, it never leaves.
It comes to stay.

Answer 1

i love it

Answer 2

I really enjoyed reading it... Too bad it had to end. But hey, isn't that the point?

Answer 3

You did a terrific job on it, it makes one think, what if ...

Answer 4

that's nice. very creative....

Answer 5

I like it. :-)