Rip it up, tear it down - give me a little time
right now I'm just feeling
like I'm certainly out of my mind
Seems like you just don't care
about the way I feel
Is anyone out there listening?
Tell me - what's the deal?
That's the best I could come up with just off the top of my head in a minute.
2007-05-10 04:40:59
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answered by Blue Oyster Kel 7
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If I heard what it seemed like then probably I might reply this larger, however it appears lovely well, and I feel I might pay attention to it on situations... It turns out slightly quick and might best be like a a million:30 and such a lot songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... however it appears adore it might be a well tune... Hope I helped...
2016-09-05 15:39:56
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answered by ? 4
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I would just write down all of your emotions. Don't worry about making it rhyme or even telling everything in order right now. Get all your ideas down and then you can organize them into a song. Your title will probably even emerge from that.
2007-05-10 04:35:15
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answered by shominyyuspa 5
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When I write a song, I try to figure out what is bothering me. Is my girlfriend causing my angst? My insecurity in traffic? The stupid sandwich "artist" at the mall? Write ALL your thoughts in a journal regardless of rhyme. Then, go back and review. Grab a few of your thoughts and go.
2007-05-10 11:32:20
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answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7
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Your voice of treason has brought me to this feeling
Beleaguered trying to get over this phase
but don't worry I will be fine,though right now I am lamented.
If I could rip your guts out right now. i'll have done it to prove I am stronger and better than you are.
Thts the best i can come up with
Good Luck
2007-05-10 13:16:36
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answer #5
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answered by Anonymous
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Write about what you are comfortable with. Write about your experiences in life, things that you are familiar with. Maybe your childhood memories that you treasure the most, whether they be good or bad.
2007-05-10 08:14:55
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answer #6
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answered by Anonymous
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come and take me
in your spaceship
together we will
travel the stars
to a place
where love grows
come and take me
in your spaceship
together we shall
sow the seeds of love
through the universe
zoom zoom zoom
here we go
to our little star
of love
in our own universe
2007-05-11 05:57:24
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answer #7
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answered by DunHurtMePlez 2
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dont worry about writing a song
go get ministry- psalm 69
crank it up
you will feel better soon
2007-05-10 12:08:48
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answered by Anonymous
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first learn how to spell "write". and if you wanna write a song, you can do it without anybodys help. if other people help you, its not your song.
2007-05-10 06:02:38
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answered by R.F. M 1
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Well what are you angry about?
Use words like seething and loathing, those are big sellers.
2007-05-10 04:51:39
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answered by Brent A 3
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