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Director Martin Scorsese talks about DiCaprio, how the kid actor became a supertar, which you can read the full article here, courtesy of Time Magazine. In newstand now!

2007-05-10 02:42:16 · 6 answers · asked by mbm 2 in Society & Culture Languages

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Director Martin Scorsese talks about DiCaprio and how the kid actor became a superstar. You can read the full article here, courtesy of Time Magazine. At newstands now!

(Thanks, supertop, for catching the spelling error, but I looked it up just now, and either spelling is acceptable.)

2007-05-10 02:45:34 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0 0

Director Martin Scorsese talks about DiCaprio, how the kid actor became a supertar. You can read the full article here, courtesy of Time Magazine. In newstands now!

Separate the first sentence into two shorter ones (easier to understand). And put an "s" on newstand (it is at more than one newstand). Otherwise the English very good.

2007-05-10 09:45:52 · answer #2 · answered by dewcoons 7 · 0 0

Director Martin Scorsese talks about DiCaprio, and how the child actor became a supertar. You can read the full article here, courtesy of Time Magazine. On new stands now!

2007-05-10 09:47:30 · answer #3 · answered by fearandloathinginmarion 2 · 0 0

Director Martin Scorsese talks about DiCaprio, how the kid actor became a superstar. Which you can read the full article here, courtesy of Time Magazine. In new stands now!

Overall you did an excellent job!

2007-05-10 09:48:03 · answer #4 · answered by Ann M 1 · 0 0

dr martin scorsese talked about decaprio, a kid who became an actor and subsequently a superstar. you can read the full article on pg..... of time magazine. in newstands now!

i think you can have it in the present tense too.
dr martin scorsese talks about decaprio, a kid who becomes an actor and subsequently a superstar.

i am an african. in my country , we are taught british english so i might not be in line with the american english because ive been here for only two years. this is the best way i would interprete what you have. good luck

2007-05-10 10:03:57 · answer #5 · answered by akos 2 · 0 0

The first answer is correct, except it should be "in news stands now." Ann M is wrong.

2007-05-10 10:38:58 · answer #6 · answered by supertop 7 · 0 0

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