Love is a GREAT feeling,
Love is every thing you need,
This person u love is always on your mind,
You can smell them,
See them when he's/she's not around,
You can evan see his/her face every where you go,
Every love song you hear or sing he's/she's on your mind,
When its all OVER he/her dumped you,
You cry,
You don't eat,
It seems like you can't go forward!
You can't move on,
Your life is over,
Cos of the one person you love,
You wished you can have him/her back,
You wish you could turn back time,
LOOK,
I'm 15 years old and i no what love is,
And one day YOU WILL TOO.
2007-04-20 23:07:35 · 25 answers · asked by amy_baby123 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
0.5
2007-04-20 23:09:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 0⤋
3
2007-04-21 06:16:27 · answer #2 · answered by annlee2289 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9/10
2007-04-21 08:04:28 · answer #3 · answered by dream theatre 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This was sweet but I'll rate in 3 Phase
First love [or in begning] : 10/10
After first brk up the next love [Whn u realize the meaning of life, move on] : 7/10
After 2nd brk up and whn u realize, love doesn't fills ur tummy and u r responsible not only to love but for happiness u have to earn [u r mature] : 4-5 / 10
2007-04-21 06:12:12 · answer #4 · answered by Kinshuk M 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
That isn't a poem dude, it's a really bad chain letter.
I was waiting for the line where it says 'Send this to 1000 of your friends or be doomed to bad loving for all of eternity'
You crashed and burned dude ;o(
2007-04-21 06:20:28 · answer #5 · answered by SarcasticByNature 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
9/10
2007-04-21 06:10:01 · answer #6 · answered by richard_beckham2001 7 · 1⤊ 3⤋
9/10, you spelled even wrong, and I like it.
3/10 If it's a poem, becasue of bad spelling/layout/nothing rhymes.
2007-04-21 06:17:49 · answer #7 · answered by phyrdraka 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good job. You should put that on poetry.com and let it be published in a book. If you are into poetry check out the website. Nice job!
2007-04-21 06:26:57 · answer #8 · answered by Scottie_E. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its ok the first bit it fine but the second half takes a dark twist and would drag the rating down to about 3
2007-04-25 06:11:07 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
10^-8
2007-04-21 06:11:15 · answer #10 · answered by Del Piero 10 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
-2
2007-04-21 06:10:04 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋