im going to 1st pu now
i watch 1.5 hrs tv minimum on week days
i will be online 1.25 hr daily
and in weekends i watch minimum 4 hrs tv
and i also attend iit coaching class
is this ok?
or should i change somethings?
2007-04-18 19:10:14 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
No, it's not OK, unless you are about 5 years old. You need to write it in proper English and use punctuation.
2007-04-19 04:01:20 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm going to first pu (???) now.
I watch a minimum of 1.5 hours of TV on week days.
I will be online for 1.25 hours a day. (daily is also correct, but we would use "a day" when speaking, "daily" is a little more formal).
On weekends I watch a minimum of 4 hours of TV.
I also attend [a or an] iit (??) coaching class.
We cannot begin a sentence with the word "And"
I do now understand some of your words (pu itt) so I could not correct them.
2007-04-18 19:20:57 · answer #2 · answered by Mimii 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why do you feel that you need approval for this? You need to explain what 1st pu and iit are. These may be common lingo in your world, but remember, there are plenty of readers who live outside of it and aren't privy to the code words and abbreviations which people in other parts of the country or other parts of the world use among themselves. Elucidate please.
2007-04-18 19:25:56 · answer #3 · answered by MathBioMajor 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's OK I guess.
GL.
2007-04-18 19:18:29 · answer #4 · answered by Beto 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋