Please help me rephrase this in formal English3?

Question

I have been asked to translate this from Arabic to English. My English is not that good so would you please help me rephrase this. Thx so much and please take a look at 1 and 2.

The abstract:
This research aims at recording the historical development of educating the visually impaired in Egypt, as well as the present situation of how the visually impaired are taught in the schools for the visually impaired. A number of other items regarding these schools will be discusses: the objectives of these schools, the admission system, training of visual impairment teachers, administration of the schools for the visually impaired, the equipment and the supplies provided to these schools, the school activities, the health, social and psychological care given to the students, the internal care and services provided in schools with boarding facilities and finally some problems which are facing the visual impairment education will be concluded and briefly discussed

Answer 1

The abstract:

This aim of this research is to record the historical development of educating the visually impaired in Egypt, as well as how teaching is conducted in schools for the visually impaired. A number of other items regarding these schools will be discussesd: the objectives of these schools, the admission system, the training of visual impairment teachers, the administration of the schools for the visually impaired, the equipment and the supplies provided to these schools, the school activities, the health, social and psychological care given to the students, the internal care and services provided in schools with boarding facilities. Finally, some problems which are facing the education of the visual impaired will be noted and briefly discussed.

It was understandable as written. The changes were just to bring it to typical English.

Answer 2

The aim of this research is to record the historical development of educating the visually impaired in Egypt, as well as the current conditions of the educational process used in the schools for the visually impaired. The following topics will also be discussed: the objectives of these schools; the admission system; the training of visual impairment teachers; administration of schools for the visually impaired; the equipment and supplies provided to these schools; the school activities; the health, social, and psychological care given to the students; the internal care and services provided at schools with boarding facilities; and lastly, some of the difficulties currently facing visual impairment education in Egypt.

Answer 3

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