I lie down and pray
That everything would go back
To the way it used to be
Where we looked into each others eyes
And knew
We were each others everything
Why can’t we go back?
Where everything seemed to be perfect
Where you would hold me keeping me warm
And saying everything will be alright
Why can’t we go back?
To when we stayed up late
Telling each others our fears and saying our love you’s
Now it seems like my worst fear is here
Where I have to find a blanket to keep warm
Where I have to tell myself everything will be alright
Staying up late with you not here
Living my fear
And know one to say my I love you too
And I just lie down and pray
That everything would go back
To the way it used to be
Where we looked into each others eyes
And knew
We were each others everything
-ME
2007-03-17 06:11:07 · 9 answers · asked by Faith C 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
This poem reminded me of my ex bf.Its beautiful and sensual in its own way.Keep up the good work.Very admirable.
2007-03-17 06:16:34 · answer #1 · answered by Sheeth 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hello, ME. I am very interested in poetry. I've written a lot myself. For me, writing poetry is a way to express those feelings that are hard to say outloud. 1st let me say, I like your poem. It's sounds like you had a love that meant the world to you & I'm sorry for your lose. 2nd-something went wrong to end the happiness you had. 3rd- Understand that if you're not happy just being with you, you can never truly be happy. I wish you MUCH happiness!
2007-03-17 06:27:00 · answer #2 · answered by Country Girl 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-01 02:03:13 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice very romantic
2007-03-17 06:17:17 · answer #4 · answered by terryodell42 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's great, wish i could write poems like that. u go girl!!
2007-03-17 06:20:28 · answer #5 · answered by SA Girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Faith C, I think it would also be very good as a song. Cheers to you!!
2007-03-17 06:16:46 · answer #6 · answered by Dowland 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow , thats super knwel , but if you want it a little more original put up more sophisticated words ,
2007-03-17 06:15:27 · answer #7 · answered by damoon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a great poem! You can tell you wrote it with your heart!!! :)
2007-03-17 06:14:32 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
good poem.
2007-03-17 06:21:56 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋