'Ends With a Kiss'
They were perfect together
Their fights always ended with 'I love you'
Their days always ended with a kiss
It was suposed to last forever
Soon their love started to fade
While the number of fights grew
They started to talk less
They only stayed together because of 'her'
She pretended everything was fine
This wasnt suposed to happen to her
She began to cry herself to sleep
Wishing she would drown in her tears
Suddenly she relised her excape
She pulled the trigger, ending her pain
No longer feeling at fault
She could finally rest
Her parents blames themselves
For she died for their love
She wanted them to be happy
She felt that she got rid of the problem
Watching them from the sky
She knows they have moved on
Although neither of them have forgotten
She made them happy
She wasnt there to keep them together
Forcing them against eachother
Fights no longer ending in 'I love you'
Nights no longer ending in a kiss
2007-03-17 05:37:32 · 5 answers · asked by Rissa! 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
(Ends with a kiss (continued))
They will always remember her
They will never forget
She died for their love
Although she was never the problem
'Deadly Addiction'
She just wants the attention is what they say
Its just a phase her mother used to pray
She saw it differanr she didnt want anyone to know
So she wore long sleeves so her scars wouldnt show
It was her relief
A way of dealing with the grief
It was her excape
That she covered with grey tape
As the years went by her scared increased
She cut once a day at the least
Until one day he broke her heart
Her whole world fell apart
That night would be her last
She cryed as the seconds slowly passed
No one ever got to say good-bye
For that night her addiction made her die
2007-03-17 05:42:50 · update #1
I am a 13 year old girl. I do not want to kill myself I just think deeply and I put myself in differant possitions in life, think 'what if'. I also wonder what would happen if I did do this. Then I either write a song or poem about it.
2007-03-17 05:45:12 · update #2
It's really deep with a good meaning. If you wrote this for some one, give it to him.
2007-03-17 05:41:28 · answer #1 · answered by Swini 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not really...to obvious about the meaning and it's like a story written in stanza form. Not a poem.
2007-03-17 12:46:43 · answer #2 · answered by Isabella R 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thatz a cooooool poem i wish i can write poems like u . BRAVA GIRL.
2007-03-17 12:54:42 · answer #3 · answered by Princesa_95 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is deep poetry
very good
2007-03-17 12:45:42 · answer #4 · answered by Wendy C 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
r u goin to kill urself and it does not rhyme
2007-03-17 12:41:49 · answer #5 · answered by wassup 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋