Hello everybody, What do you think of this poem ..Well i`m going to give it to my love.
Love....
Is it the fragrance of rose in the morning dew?
Could it be the feeling of the gentle breeze in the meadow?
Is it as beautiful as the shape of a Heart?
Is it as sweet as the song of the nightingale?
Or The rays of Sunlight though the windows of a dim room?
Or perhaps the melody of the dancing water in a stream?
Can it be compared to Sunset with layers of overlapping warm colours in the sky?
Is it as magnificent as the Shining stars in the Sky?
Yet, All the wonders of nature are too weak to be compared to Love....
If I were asked to define Love..It would be you..Yes In my eyes, with my soul, every inch of being the definition of Love is you...Nothing is more beautiful when our hearts play this infinite melody of Love...The meaning of Love is you....The essence of Love is you...The feeling of love is you...For I found the meaning of true love only in you..My Baby...I love You
2007-03-17 03:44:45 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Thanks to all.
2007-03-17 03:45:39 · update #1
loved it. you are truely talented.
2007-03-17 03:54:02 · answer #1 · answered by evil Hesh 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you going to slip it to him...
I would really dig it if my gf wrote such a poem and then asked me if she could read it to me.
Good luck and good job.
2007-03-17 03:49:02 · answer #2 · answered by shovelkicker 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
take out "overlapping" (layers and overlapping are redundant)
and take out "I were" in the last stanza.
read it with the omissions and see if it sounds better. :)
otherwise, very nice.
2007-03-17 03:51:45 · answer #3 · answered by Thrill K 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was a great poem if i gave that to my bf he would love it
good luck with giving it to your bf
2007-03-17 03:52:40 · answer #4 · answered by danaejah c 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lovely poem.
2007-03-17 03:49:03 · answer #5 · answered by barley 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, very nice.
2007-03-17 03:50:44 · answer #6 · answered by Jenni 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋